Whiteguardian [PegasusGhoul] [complete]

==Basic Information==

Name:Whiteguardian
Age:216
Gender:male
Race:Pegasus Ghoul
Occupation:Mercenary

==Physical Description==
Picture:
Coat Color: White
Mane and Tail Color: black
Eye Color: light blue
Cutie Mark:shield and sword

==Personality==

A pony that fights against the injustices of the world and strives to bring peace to this world. He gives everyone a chance to be friends, but if they uselessly endanger others on purpose, he will kill them. After years of solitude, he is tired of being alone, and prefers to be around other ponies.Is also a perv :3


==History==

He got his cutie mark while protecting a younger pony from some bullies. Before the war, he was a guard, but he was discharged from the military for not following orders; he went back to help a town that had just been destroyed from the battle. Instead, he decided to travel around helping people out all over Equestria.

But one day, when he was on his way to see a friend, the Megaspells started to fall. One had been dropped in the direction he was headed; he rushed to go help out, but just before he got there, they hit the place with another Megaspell. He was just on the edge, so he survived, but he figured nothing would survive that.

He headed back to his home in Cloudsdale, but when he got there, he found there was nothing left. While walking through the remains of a nearby town, he found a partially broken mirror and was startled by what he saw. It was him, but he was deformed. This was when he found out he was a ghoul.

For about the next 100 years, he kept himself pretty well unknown to anyone and occasionally went out to look for food. But eventually, he got bored and decided to attack the slave trade and do some other random thing. He caused an uproar for about for awhile before he had a near encounter with death – relatively speaking, of course.

What had happened was that he had been captured by the slavers. They planned to torture him to death for the trouble he had caused. Luckily, there was some sort of commotion outside. In the time he was given, he managed to break his bindings, steal some of there supplies and carfuly and quietly make his way out of the bulding almost getting caught several times but eventualy escaped.

During the time between then and now, nothing that interesting happened; he just kept fighting slavers. Eventually, he began to offer himself for hire, depending on the target, and this brings us to now.




Strength:5
Perception:5
Endurance:6
Charisma:9
Intelligence:5
Agility:5
Luck:5

==Secondary Attributes==

Health:190
DT:5+8=13
AP:30
RM:9
Crit Threshold:96
Botch Threshold:6
Dodge:15 +5 to Melee Rolls, +5 to Gun Rolls

9mm pistol (Damage: 16 – 96: ×2 – AP cost: 5)
Knife (Damage: 13 – 96: ×2 – AP cost: 4)

==Skills==
Barter:32
Energy Weapons:14
Explosives:14
Guns*:29
Lockpick:19
Medicine*:39
Melee:14
Repair:24
Science:24
Sneak:19
Speech*:47
Survival:26
Unarmed:16

==Racial Attributes==

On a Wing and a Prayer: Capable of flight.Leaf on the Wind: +5 to dodge rolls while flying.

Flyin’ Circles Round Ya: Can increase Agility to 12 via perks.

==Traits==

Ghoul,Good natured.

==Perks==

List your perks obtained from level ups here.

==Inventory==

9mm pistol
knife
Mercenary Outfits
Caps(150)

Hello Whiteguardian.

I looked over your application and there are things in your history that I need you to fix. First off, the top half of your app looks ok. However, the bottom half needs work. For one, there is no slavers in Manehatten. Another thing, there is no way one ghoul could cause an uproar that would last for 50 years. The truth is, even if there was an attack, the uproar wouldn't last any longer than a day.

Now, after that, you wrote that your character was then captured by slavers. Now, if your character was captured by slavers, there is no way that it would be that easy to break out. Slavers wouldn't simply "go to bed" and leave their slave without a guard. Not only that, they wouldn't spend the time to torture a slave to death. They would simply shoot them. So, if that happened, your character wouldn't be alive.

One more thing unrelated to your history. You have to choose a new armor for yourself. Reinforced Leather Barding is a medium teir armor and is only accessible at level 5 and up. Choose another armor. Also, your natural DT is 5, not 2. Also, please assign yourself an age.

Fix these errors and then you should be ok for approving.