Flame Wing [PEGASUS] [Complete]

==Basic Information==
Name: Flame Wing
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Pegasus
Occupation: Aerial navigator

==Physical Description==

Picture:
Coat Colour: Red-orange
Mane Colour: Red and orange
Tail Colour: Red and orange
Eye Colour: Deep red
Cutie Mark: A meteor with flames streaking behind it

==Personality==

Your character’s personality: A lonely Pegasus that will kill in defense. Tries not to waste anything like food or weapons. And tries not to be seen by anypony friendly or not, mostly because he lost his parents to bandits who acted friendly, until they let their guard down. He loves killing bandits and raiders, mostly as revenge for his parents, he also likes collecting weapons, armors, and other items off of the bodies of enemies. But, he does hate it when he gets seen by anypony. Although he isn’t always good at hiding from larger groups of people.
==History==

What is your character's backstory in the wastes? Born in the outskirts of Old Appleloosa, and raised there for most of his life. His parents were killed and he never forgot the bandits who did it. He’s been hunting for the bandits who killed them ever since then.

==S.P.E.C.I.A.L.==

Strength: 5
Perception: 5
Endurance: 5
Charisma: 4
Intelligence: 5
Agility: 6
Luck: 5

==Skills==

Alchemy: N/A
Barter: 17
Energy Weapons: 19
Explosives: 19
Flight: 36 (Primary Skill)
Guns: 36 (Primary Skill)
Lockpick: 19
Magic: N/A
Medicine: 19
Melee: 19
Repair: 19
Science: 19
Sneak: 21
Speech:17
Survival: 34 (Primary Skill)
Unarmed: 19

==Racial Perks==

List your race’s natural perks here
Wings--- Pegasi have access to the Flight skill

Agile Fliers--- Pegasi add an additional 5 to dice rolls when determining their chance to dodge against targets they are in combat with while the pegasus is flying.

==First Level Traits==

You may choose to have some character traits at level one.
Heavy Hoofed, Trigger Discipline

==Perks==

Hi Flame!

Firstly, welcome to the board. I'll be reviewing your character sheet, so if you have any questions or concerns feel free to PM me or reply to this post.

Firstly, could you please expand on your character's history, this provides a bit more definition to your character and helps to justify why they make certain choices in RP when presented with different scenarios. Further to this, it makes your character feel more attached to the setting. Ideally this would be at least 2 paragraphs in length.

Also, your SPECIAL only totals 35. You get 40 points to distribute to the 7 stats, can you please correct this and also update your skills to reflect the SPECIAL change.

Once you've done this I'm more than happy to accept your application.

Thanks!